One day in Earth Planet, when every worst thing were occurred inside, when war and disease were never be resolved and when the love and peace will never be found again….there was still a hope about those love and peace in a small village far away from the navel of the worst. There lived a boy named Maestro, he likes helping all the people in the village neither comparing them each other so that why they call him as “ a good Samaritan “.
When he was child, he lived with all the member of his family in a big house which was plentiful of wealthy. So that he could get all the things of his want. But he didn’t like living in such that place. He didn’t want to be spoiled and always depend to his parents. Then, He decided to begin and create his own destiny independently beyond of his parent help. So that he left his family and came to a small village far away from his home. There he lived with an old woman who adopted him. The old woman kept and took care for him like his own son since she didn’t have children anymore. There he could get every new thing that he could not get in his previous place and he began to feel such the feeling which he called as simplicity. He knew the hardness of working and getting money by his own hands so he could appreciate his live. Maestro had to help the old woman like he treated his own grandmother since she was not able to settle all of her job by herself. He did many kind of job such washing clothes, cleaning the entire of the house, and cooking food for them. All the people entire the village knew that Maestro was such a good person and responsibly care to the environment. All the people also care to him.
It had been very long time that Maestro had not met his family until his step-grandmother passed away. Furthermore, he lived in his step-grandmother house a lonely with no body. He knew that there is no need to look back to the bad thing which had passed. He realized that all the suggestion and advices that were given by his step-grandmother will beneficial for his life in the future. The only one thing that he always remembers is that man has to face the life strongly, patiently and honestly. It had been very useful and valuable advice for his self.
One day, he walked along the forest seeking for food to be cooked. There he met an old man who was not able to bring the wood that he has cut before. Then Maestro helped him to bring the wood to the old man’s house. He remembered his passed step-grandmother when he helped the old man. The old man told him that he lived in his house with his family. They live in a very simple condition. When they arrived in the house, the old man introduced him to all the member of the old man’s family. Maestro looked that the family lived in an inappropriate condition. They were actually a big family but the house was too small. The place where they lived was in the forest and it was far enough from the center of the village. It needed an hour to be arrived there by foot. He was sure that they lived harder than him in fulfilling the needs every day. He felt that he needs to help them as a long as he could. Actually he could fulfill his own needs every day by his self, but it was impossible to help them if he could not earn more money than the usual. He ever thought that his own family might help him to get money. But, he realizes that his going in leaving his house was because of his decision to face his life independently by his own self. He didn’t want to be seen foolish if he back there since he has promised to his self that he had to back home while bringing his own success. After thinking hard, finally he took a decision to go to the city looking for his luck in getting a job. His want to help them and his own ambition had encouraged him to do that.
In early morning after he had prepared enough supplies and some certain things that might come to be useful in his journey, he took leave to every person entire the village especially his close friend there. He didn’t expect that one of his friends accompanied him to go to the city. Her friend’s name was Yeta. Yeta told Maestro that he also felt sympathetic to the old man’s family when he heard about that. Yeta was getting sure that Maestro was such a very noble of kind hearth. So that, without thinking more he decided to help him in looking for a job in the city. Before that Maestro had told the old man and his family to stay for a while during his going to the city. Afterward, while bringing a great hope they finally left the village and went to the city. They didn’t know what kind of problem they will face there since they had accustomed to live in an ordinary life style in the village. But maestro was sure that it won’t be serious problems because of his firm believe that his passed step- grandmother will help him from the other world and beseech a good things to the God for his success.
In the middle of their journey, they met A woman whose car was break down. It seemed that as if Maestro should be in the place where a person need for a help. Although they had their own business going to the city, they still tried to give hands to the girl in order to repair the girl’s car. While having a chat with the girl, it shall be a good decision to help her since the girl told them that she also had the same destination to the city. So the girl offered two seats for Maestro and Yeta to go together to the city by riding her repaired car. The girl also offered them to stay with her in her house during the time when they looking for a job. Maestro felt that might be the god had been creating some good plans for him. He thought that what he had done had repaid him as well as he helped the people. Next morning, the girl showed the place where they might found some vacancy. They came to a big and high building in the center of the city. Firstly, he was not sure if he was qualified to be chosen on that vacancy. After leaving the application there, then he back to the girl house by renting a taxi. The next morning he got a letter from the company where he left his application before. Yeta accompanied him to go there and they should be in a hurry since they had to be arrived there in a hour. When he would stop the taxi, he saw a boy who was crying on the corner of the road. Yeta asked him to ignore the boy because there is no enough time for them anymore. But Maestro was truly the kind-hearth person. He remembered his step-grandmother who advised him to always help the person who need for a help although there is another big problem of your business. Exactly, he knew that he could lose his opportunities of the job, but he made his own decision. Then, he came closer to the boy and asked her “why are you crying…. You are a boy….you are going to be a strong boy?” then the boy answered” nothing….Hiks….I just lost my way to go home….my mother left me in the market… hikz….hiks” Maestro replied “don’t worry….it’s going to be alright….wipe your tear and I will take you home boy”. Then, they tried to go to the boy’s house after the boy telling his address. They asked every person whom they met in the street until finally they could arrived on the boy’s house after hours looking. After that, they remember that he should attend the request of the letter to go to the company, but he was sure that the company might be closed. He decided to resent his application to another big company next morning. Next two days, early morning Maestro was woken up by Yeta and happily he show him a letter which told maestro that he had been accepted in that company. He couldn’t believe that, it was such a great luck that came to him. Afterward, he came there to confirm about that letter since he was a little bit not sure about that. When he arrived there, he was waited by a boy whom he met before. He was confused of the boy being there. Then the boy asked him to follow him to go inside. He was getting confuse when he saw all the officer entire the company respect the boy as if the boy was their boss. Then he stopped in front of the door of a big room. He heard a sound from the room asked him to get inside to the room. When he came in, he was surprised when he knew that he was facing the owner of the company. The owner of the company said that maestro had qualified to place the part of the job which was stated on the vacancy. He also stated that the boy whom he helped to find his house was actually the son of him. Furthermore, to avenge his goodness, the owner of the company gave him the higher position of the job in that company. It was such an unbelievable statement for Maestro. He was really not sure that all the things that he had done to the people had brought him to that moment. But, he had to turn his thought that what he was undergoing on that time was the fact that he should accept happily and proudly. He believed that his step-grandmother will always request him all the best from the God. The other good news also came since his close friend, Yeta, had engaged with the girl whom they met before. Actually maestro also love the girl at the first time they met, but he let his close friend to get her.
After working there for months, he decided back to his village to meet his new family who had been waiting for him during his going to the city. By using his salary that he got from working in the city, every month he could give some of it to his new family for buying food and for the children’s education.
Finally, he realized that it had been very long time he never met his real family. He realized that he had his own permanent job that he could get by his effort. Afterward, he decided to meet them and he could prove to his family that he had been an independent and success person. Both of his parents were very proud having a son like Maestro. Maestro and all the people whom they had ever met live happily together in the village and in the country. He had changed their life and his own life to be Better.
It is a nice story that has many moral values. I enjoy reading it. But, I am confused with one of the sentences in your fifth paragraph. The sentence is “Her friend’s name was Yeta.” Who’s the one that you want to tell in that sentecne? I think you typed the wrong word. Do you mean that Yeta was Maestro’s friend? It will be better if you add some explanations about it in your story, so the readers can understand it easily. Over all, I like your story very much. I also like the characters’ names in yours. Good job!
BalasHapus"wipe your tear and I will take you home boy”, I like that sentence.. Your story is full of live lessons. Nice ^^
BalasHapusYebbie I like your story. Especially in the 'hiks'part, very interesting. Hehehehe ... At first, I think ypur story is a fairy tale, but it was not. your Story is also contains a lot of moral values. Good job yebbie
BalasHapusgood story full of moral value,and i like your ending.
BalasHapusgood job
Well, it is a good story.
BalasHapusI like your story.
I like the character of Maestro, he is an enthusiasm person to face his life independently by him self.
Nice story..
BalasHapusYou tell us some advices which can make us to be a independent person...
You also describe Maestro's character, nicely. I like it..
I think your story has a good moral value and it will help us to know how we live in this world and get a better life. I like Maestro’s character who is a good person. This is a nice story, good job…
BalasHapusyour story full of moral lessons..... I like characters that you create in the story...
BalasHapusyour story is so intresting.. i like the moral value end the ending of your story...
BalasHapusthe story is inspired me although there're some mistaken capitalizing word like word 'better' that you type 'Better'
BalasHapusi also like the way you tell the story. great job yeta.
this is a good way to teach the young people, i mean teenager to be strong and independentlike maestro did.
Actually words "Maestro Yeta" is not odd for me..you've already used those word since we were at senior high school..i love Maestro's characteristic..he loved to help every people..i hope all of readers will do like what Maestro did..good story, bik!
BalasHapuswhoa, is Maestro Yeta real? or this is your true life? Nice yebbi, you done it very well. many moral value we can get from this story. Nice posting! :)
BalasHapusat the beginning of the story,i thought it will be a humor story because of the word 'in planet earth'. ha ha. but is actually a great story. i like moral values. it is show what the purpose of the author to make a story. good job
BalasHapusgood job...
BalasHapusIt is such a nice story..
you described the character very well and your story has many moral values.
I like it...
Full of moral value. Your story is perfect! It’s easy to read and understand, the characters on this story are clear. Doesn’t too long and simple, but everything is clear. Good job, yebbie.
BalasHapus“A good value is given in this story. When we have a dream, reach it by your own effort and don’t forget to pray. This is one way to reach it. Do a good thing in your life, so we can reach our dream and change our life. From this story, although there were many problems found by the character, he could pass it and show his success.”
BalasHapusyebii,,, it is very goood story
BalasHapuswe like it
your story is combined by humor and serious thinking
we like your grammar
we like your way in telling it
we hope the writer is also can be a good Samaritan for us
by amik and gung diah
What a kindhearted boy, I love maestro character very much. Maestro is an actual good Samaritan, for that all of good lucks will follow him everywhere he is. First time I though Yeta is a girl, but then I realize that Yeta is a boy; I’m sorry. :) I think your story has good enough grammar, but you still should be careful in writing the sentences, like this sentence: Yeta to go together to the city by riding her repaired car. I don’t really understand with what you mean here. You didn’t describe the girl character before, so it confused me a little bit. Overall, I think each paragraph of your story has already have a topic, your orientation is clear enough, I like your story. Good job Yebbie.
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